I'm Back To Stay

A poem of awakening from a long slumber

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I’m Back To Stay!

Oh no world, be careful!

Out of control to stay

Full speed ahead in a powerful way

Got my mojo back and it isn’t going away

No lack of energy for me today

I’m back in this world to stay

Watch out, I’m barreling down the alley

Get out of my way!

 

Author's Note

I changed my diet, I've been eating foods that give me energy for the last few days. I feel so much better. I have much more energy. Colors in the world seem brighter. I hear the birds singing in the morning. I feel like my old self again. It's amazing!

Reviews

[akapr17other]

I liked it!

[Tina Kline]

A strong positive poem. A wonderful choice you made. Keep it up!

[HopelesslyDevoted]

scary picture, somewhat scary poem, but still very good. lol

[JanieB]

Well done.

[Undying Glory]

wow this sure was cool work, i like this a lot! now those two lines right at the end are just bursting with energy. now this is probably weird but since you put right at the description about "waking from a long slumber" i was reminded of scenes from computer games/science fiction books/etc about people awakening feeling completely refreshed from cryo-sleep. lol
still this was really nice! awesome!

[KAREN]

I can feel the energy reading this!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Maybe I need to try this, so I can get my mojo back! Great poem one can learn from and live by.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

It would make an AWESOME song!

I can relate though. I went on a diet change and on day 3
I felt brand new. Had no idea what that junk food was doing
to me. lol

[Arsenic Nemesis]

XD I'm always zooming this way and that; I love sweet foods (though not as much as spicy food mmmmm) This is awesome, I love it! Makes me hungry... Keep up thr good work!~

[D.J. Lutz]

There's no question about it - positive energy abounds throughout your words here! We should never underestimate the power of food. You seem to have made a worthwhile change in the ole' diet. Good for you!