Goddess On Pink Toes

A ballet poem

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Goddess On Pink Toes

How you twinkle on your toes

You spin, giving everyone a show

Soaring through the falling snow

Like a mighty eagle with pointed toes

Spinning round and round as the clouds close

You’re a goddess in the snow

Dancing on your pink toes

Where the wind will carry you,

Who knows?

He throws you wherever you go

You’re my goddess on pink toes

Author's Note

Love ballet

Reviews

[Jibey]

Bit cold on the toes if outside in the snow! But nice if inside by a warm fire...

[Linear]

Hate the ballet, an eagle wearing pink dance slippers does nothing to improve matters, but I did enjoy your pink toes

[Jazmine T]

lovely..I can see her pirouetting!

[Coyote Poetry]

You create a good vision with poem. People who can dance will steal your breathe away. Great story and a positive ending to a outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Art Sun]

nice work on this poem..

a special view of the ballet

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

This was beautiful! Reminded me of my younger years- when I was in ballet!

[Undying Glory]

wonderful work, this was very well-written about ballet! reminded me of Anna Pavlova for some reason. this was very beautiful work, just so surreal! great!

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

very creative and fresh to the mind....and at the same time reveals your soft side:)

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Made me dizzy in a good way.

[Cynthia]

WOW! It flow so well when I say it out loud and I feel like dancing now! Also, the rhyming is so amazing! I love it!