Leaves of the Day

A poem about various forms of leaves

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Leaves of the Day

 

Golden leaves on an oak tree blow, falling to the earth

At leave, a soldier heads to port ready to greet the ladies

Losing my busy job leaves me restless with nothing to do

Leaves of a family table make room for more guests to feed

When you choose to leave me, my heart will bleed without you

Finally I'm leaving my dreams of you behind, to pursue my own

Goodbye, my love, goodbye...watch as I leave

Author's Note

Found myself pondering the other day in the shower about all the diffrent uses of the word leave. Couldn't shake the thought. Let me know what you think

Reviews

[Abbie]

great and different in a good way


100/100

[Blake Q Hatfield]

Like the leaves of autumn, the word itself has many colors, or rather context. Nice write!

[Michael of Gilead]

Leaves of many types and hues...

Now, like a tree...I shall leaf ;)

[Tina Kline]

What a fun and unique idea, at least to me. This is very clever and impressive. I love it!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

I thought she did a great job! Excellent!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

You speak with beautiful and elegant penmanship.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

I like the independence of the end, such a strong poem!

[Jibey]

I can't stop thinking about you in the shower...

[Zachary_James]

Love this i could see the picture in m mind as i continued reading this, one of my favorites of yours but i am sure there is more from you, Once again GREAT JOB keep it up,

[Undying Glory]

this was just superb work, now what a great poem on some of the eccentricities of English! this was wonderfully written here! awesome!!