Too many children are victims of domestic violence. I wrote this one night after volunteering at a children's shelter and seeing a child with a black eye.
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Oh I hate violence against children. It is a horrible thing, I wish that it would cease to exist.
Your poem speaks of truth, I'm glad you can stand up and say something like this!
Too true; some people just don't seem to care, do they? This is a wonderful poem, very deep and powerful. Really well written and structured, great job. Poor kids... I mean, they may scare me at times but no one deserves that... Amazing work, keep it up~
Oh, how sad it is! Really, lots of student is hurt cause of violence between their parents! The children are so sad, and they will soon develop a sad childhood! Your poem is so real, and I like it starting from a child's view!