Candy Land Dance

A whirlwind dance of rapture

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Candy Land Dance

As tuxedo

Licorice sticks spin

While festive red

Candy canes dance

Their twirling waltz

In the autumn wind

 

Bells of the

Cathedral will sound

As we embark on our

Dance of honeybee’s glee

 

Let’s electric slide on

Our tangy rainbow floors

Here we’ll begin to explore

Joyous rhapsody of

Gypsy folk love

 

Mingle with spider monkeys

Jive with baboon groups

Playing their bassoons

 

Let loose with kangaroos

Whistling Dixie on

Their shiny maroon

Cinnamon flutes

 

Ecstasy we’ll find

As peaceful

Music subdues our

Ire and pangs as volatile

Violins rise and fall

Within their string

And bow range

 

Hershey kisses

Will melt us

In our candy land

 

Reviews

[Jeff Bresee]

It was like being in Wonka's factory. What a fun read this was. Thanks.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Sweet..!!!

[sarah]

aww so sweet and wonderful! great work

[D.J. Lutz]

Love the imagery. Thanks!

[Poetic Beauty]

This sounds like and adult version of Candyland to me. The description was done amazing well.

[Linear]

Ah the Candy man comes, a twist of butter candy, a rainbows lollipop with chocolate kisses and strawberry misses. Sweetness I licks your poem ;)

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Sweet creative Poem! What a dance!

[KAREN]

A hot yummy read! every woman's dream!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Surreal. What a dream!

[Solidad]

This was very whimsical and a very fun piece to read.