Candy Land Dance

A whirlwind dance of rapture

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Candy Land Dance

As tuxedo

Licorice sticks spin

While festive red

Candy canes dance

Their twirling waltz

In the autumn wind

 

Bells of the

Cathedral will sound

As we embark on our

Dance of honeybee’s glee

 

Let’s electric slide on

Our tangy rainbow floors

Here we’ll begin to explore

Joyous rhapsody of

Gypsy folk love

 

Mingle with spider monkeys

Jive with baboon groups

Playing their bassoons

 

Let loose with kangaroos

Whistling Dixie on

Their shiny maroon

Cinnamon flutes

 

Ecstasy we’ll find

As peaceful

Music subdues our

Ire and pangs as volatile

Violins rise and fall

Within their string

And bow range

 

Hershey kisses

Will melt us

In our candy land

 

Reviews

[Abbie]

very sweet :)


100/100

[Blake Q Hatfield]

The images were quite interesting. Lots of energy in this poem. Reads like a fun time.

[Calypso]

Love the last line! Very good. The color adds to this as well.
Now I want chocolate...

[Mauricio Montoya]

another sweet piece well done.

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is so good. Made me wish to find a band of Gypsies and listen/dance to the music of being alive. The violin is my favorite. Great description and words. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Michael of Gilead]

Sounds like a hell of a sugar rush ;)

[Undying Glory]

impressive imagery here, i sure loved this one! the picture at the start sure added to the entirety of this poem! great job!

[Doug Ordunio]

I like the tangy rainbows--a beautiful touch...

[Tina Kline]

Great imagery/descriptions. A really fun and surreal read. I really enjoyed this.

[JanieB]

Very dreamy.