Cosmic Flowers

A poem of blooming love

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Cosmic Flowers

Cosmic flowers

You are to me

 

Hues so vibrant

And contrasting

My desires bring

Me great pain

 

Curves so soft

I have no refrain

 

Your laughter dances

Light as a feather,

Driving me insane

 

You, my darling

Are my best game

 

I could play you

Over and over again

 

You are the artwork

I just have to frame

 

Reviews

[D.J. Lutz]

Realize I know nothing formally about poetry, but I thought this was very cool. Love the ending.

[KAREN]

Nice flow, and beautiful as can be! Love the picture too!

[The Raven King]

nice rhythm and pacing in this piece. I like the last three doublets the best

[OT]

nice and romantic!! and whimsical!

[xx_strawberry_xx]

That was so sweet! Lovely poem, great job! ^^

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

So romantic! you are the art work I just have to frame! So beautiful!

[MuSe Ampoule]

Whimsical poetry. Made me smile!

[Cynthia]

so sweet! Love as blooming flowers, so real as welll! Like others say, I love the ending as well,it's such a good one!

[prim]

This is so sweet, i love it!

[Linear]

Blooming heck, a great blooming poem by a lady in full bloom