Do You Think Of Me?

A romantic poem

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Do You Think About Me?

My heart skips a beat

When I hear our beach song

That reminds me of you

 

It’s been years since

I’ve heard that Moody Blues tune

 

But my heart begins to flutter

When I talk I start to stutter

My head fills with clutter

 

Once the music plays

I feel my body sway

I close my eyes and I feel

Your hands between my thighs

Giving me a surprise

 

My body again feels anew

Suddenly my lips yearn to kiss you

 

To feel the pure

Bliss like they used to

 

All these years I’ve

Been so blue without you

 

Oh how we danced

Playing in the California sun

 

That’s where

We had our fun

 

I wonder if you think about me

When our song is sung

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[TAO]

Marie Harrison, I have to agree with Jibey... For some reason, I felt like I was transported back to some old 50's cafe that was the main hangout for teens in the suburbs... Go figure that... I think it had something to do with the color you chose. Don't know why, because it's not the first I've seen it, but somehow, the contrast against the whiteness of the page struck me. That aside, the poem itself was wonderful. Even with the mention of hands between thighs, there was an innocence to it. Great stuff, Marie Harrison.

[Jibey]

Had a smoothie feeling about it... like the soft feeling of a hand between your thighs...*smiles*

[Magdelena]

Oh La la! Now this was grand.. I felt myself singing in my head a soft tune to the words.. Way to go with this. I really enjoyed..

Mags xx