Do You Think Of Me?

A romantic poem

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Do You Think About Me?

My heart skips a beat

When I hear our beach song

That reminds me of you

 

It’s been years since

I’ve heard that Moody Blues tune

 

But my heart begins to flutter

When I talk I start to stutter

My head fills with clutter

 

Once the music plays

I feel my body sway

I close my eyes and I feel

Your hands between my thighs

Giving me a surprise

 

My body again feels anew

Suddenly my lips yearn to kiss you

 

To feel the pure

Bliss like they used to

 

All these years I’ve

Been so blue without you

 

Oh how we danced

Playing in the California sun

 

That’s where

We had our fun

 

I wonder if you think about me

When our song is sung

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Linear]

Marie Marie, what can this poor guy say, a song of love on a sunny day
A man and a woman lay down to play
with hands between thighs he gave a surprise
I bet that put a smile on your face.

Songs do that, bring back memories even a whisper of a certain scent, and they all come flooding back, we wonder where the time went, where things went so wrong, but we still have those thoughts of a pure love that inspires us to write such poetry, well done my beautiful friend

[JanieB]

Aw..this is so sweet.

[Undying Glory]

wow so sweet and passionate, romance just oozes off this one. amazing work, this was just so beautiful.
"My body again feels anew

Suddenly my lips yearn to kiss you



To feel the pure

Bliss like they used to"
very potent love!

[sarah]

this is really great I really enjoyed reading this poem I love the flow to this poem and this is just a beautiful poem

[Art Sun]

nice work Marie...those romantic nights, songs, and memories are oh so sweet...nice...

[OT]

I don't know why but this:

"But my heart begins to flutter

When I talk I start to stutter

My head fills with clutter"

really reminds me of something an old hollywood starlet would say with the exuberant gasping kind of voice!! (random, huh haha) nice!!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Romantic it was! Beautifully written!

[KAREN]

Beautiful and full of emotion! Love is expressed! Excellent write!

[cfix]

I still like listening to the Moddy blues at times. This is a wonderful write
in which you have penned. Romantic write indeed. Like the picture as well.
Well written!

[Zachary_James]

Love it