Do You Think Of Me?

A romantic poem

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Do You Think About Me?

My heart skips a beat

When I hear our beach song

That reminds me of you

 

It’s been years since

I’ve heard that Moody Blues tune

 

But my heart begins to flutter

When I talk I start to stutter

My head fills with clutter

 

Once the music plays

I feel my body sway

I close my eyes and I feel

Your hands between my thighs

Giving me a surprise

 

My body again feels anew

Suddenly my lips yearn to kiss you

 

To feel the pure

Bliss like they used to

 

All these years I’ve

Been so blue without you

 

Oh how we danced

Playing in the California sun

 

That’s where

We had our fun

 

I wonder if you think about me

When our song is sung

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Robin]

music and reminiscing , inseparable ...

[xx_strawberry_xx]

Aww! I enjoyed reading it very much, Well done! The only thing I think I didn't like about it was the font and colour, it seemed abit annoying sorry D:
But still. Veryy well done :D

[MuSe Ampoule]

Blissful Write Marie! Always a delight!

[Goodbye]

I'm definitely feeling you here - so easy to let our minds wander and wonder what it was, what it is to them now...your emotion really pours through.

Excellent work.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is cute but sentimental work, Sweet Marie!

[Liza]

very sweet and tender

[Dream Weaver]

This was sweeter than sugar...A tad to much rhyming at the start but you
pulled it together nicely from then on...Nice write Marie...

[Gone]

Bit mushy for me! I'm not into the romance stuff. However I did remind me of my first real girlfriend, though I never managed to get my hand between her thighs :(
Still it's a good poem.

[Arsenic Nemesis]

B'aw, this is proper sweet! I love it, the wording was beautiful and this piece was really well presented. Keep up the good work!~

[Cynthia]

awwwwww, that's sooo sweet and romantic!
Really, thats what we feel!