SugarMicrophone

Lyrics to a song that I wrote

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

SugarMicrophone

Pour me some sugar

From your microphone

 

Put some Soul

Into your voice,

Girl, get out of control!

 

Give me something

To remember,

Something I can

Take home!

 

Make me feel a reason

To be on this earth to roam

 

Make me feel

Like I’m in a surreal zone,

Take me to my

Pleasure dome

 

Make me feel like

I’m not so alone

 

Give me some

Sugar from

Your microphone

Author's Note

I was thinking of how music moves us. How it makes you feel alive and strong with a simple song. It's the singer pouring their sould into the microphone. Making us feel whole, giving us courage to carry on or thrive. That was my impetus. Let me know what you think, please.

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

" Pour some sugar on me" Def Leppard...It seems awfully short for song lyrics but I'd be interested in hearing it put to music.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Music has always been a big part of my life... it can be a best friend in down time or side kick during the good. Your words are like a soulful melody.

[The Raven King]

This maybe if not my favorite from you, one of my favs. Great tone, rhythm and diction. This is a very solid piece.

[Shellie]

very good lyrics excellent job

[Short.Nerd]

Nice job!

[Zachary_James]

All i have to say, amazing job

[HopelesslyDevoted]

This is the first writing of yours that i have read and its awesome!!! my life is music and i have to say, this is probably my favorite poem i have ever read! I have never added a poem to my library before, but this totally deserves it! OMG! I love this sooooo much!! I am totally giving this 100 on the rating! this would be a great song! if you make into a song and post it on youtube or something, please send it to me. would love to hear it. :)

[Undying Glory]

nice song, imagined it as quite the dance tune or soul song, although probably the dance tune would be better. this could be real catchy too. loved this, and what an idea that sparked this one off!

[Nights Tale]

goood poem xNTx

[sarah]

this is FANTASTIC! I adore this poem great job!