SugarMicrophone

Lyrics to a song that I wrote

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

SugarMicrophone

Pour me some sugar

From your microphone

 

Put some Soul

Into your voice,

Girl, get out of control!

 

Give me something

To remember,

Something I can

Take home!

 

Make me feel a reason

To be on this earth to roam

 

Make me feel

Like I’m in a surreal zone,

Take me to my

Pleasure dome

 

Make me feel like

I’m not so alone

 

Give me some

Sugar from

Your microphone

Author's Note

I was thinking of how music moves us. How it makes you feel alive and strong with a simple song. It's the singer pouring their sould into the microphone. Making us feel whole, giving us courage to carry on or thrive. That was my impetus. Let me know what you think, please.

Reviews

[Alicia™]

Music is such a wonderful thing!

[Abbie]

This is a very good poem

100/100

[JanieB]

This is great. I think it would make a good foundation for a song. Perhaps you could write some more to elonagate the lyrics. Great job!

[Tina Kline]

I really love this, very uplifting. These lyrics would make wonderful song, get some upbeat music and people will be a dancin'!

[Blake Q Hatfield]

Very nice write. Music is powerful, and we tend to have attachment and emotion evoked from it. The lead singer is like a demigod at times, the voice pulling us in like a siren. Great capture of that feeling. Hope you take the lyrics to the next level. If you do, you'll have to post so we all can take a listen.

[Mauricio Montoya]

for me music brings back memories some good some bad and some even sad.

[Athena Ramos]

i think you really captured the feeling and poured it into this poem! XD

[ebonpinion]

I thought this was really good. Music does stir the soul...a voice, an instrument. They all move and a lot of times it's awesome. ^_^

[Twilight]

Although not a musical person, I wondered if these lyrics would be suitable for a specific genre of music? Perhaps, their very simplicity could make it easier to incorporate into a song? Whilst reading, the shortness of this piece seemed to strengthen the power of key words. Indeed, such words would stand out less in a longer piece. What do other readers and reviewers think about these points, I wonder? Also, which theme will Marie choose for her next composition? Thankyou for sharing this with us!

[Michael of Gilead]

Pretty cool :)

Work on the hook ;)