My Beloved

A Beloved Christmas Poem

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

My Beloved

Baby there’s one thing

You won’t find under the tree

 

 

That's the best

Part of me

 

 

No box could contain this

Beating heart that pumps

For you with glee

 

Because my love for

You is true my darling

 

Because my days

Would be filled with

Sorrow and Loss

Without you beside me

 

Because I am

Positive that

My babies’ Mommy

You were meant to be

 

Because your eyes

Are as bright as

Blue sapphires alight

 

Tonight I’m on

Bended Knee

Asking you

To marry me

 

For making you

My beloved wife

Would make me so happy

 

Will you marry me?

 

Author's Note

I thought about how many marriage proposals there are during Christmas. I was inspired, so I wrote this poem.

Reviews

[Alicia™]

Ahhhhh, I love this! It was so sweet it made me tingle.

[Mauricio Montoya]

love the font over all great job.

[tynamite]

This is unbelievably romantic. It's so romantic, it's untrue.

[sarah]

awwww I love romance and this is so romantic! GREAT work

[Tina Kline]

This is romantic and delightful!

[Goodbye]

You are in the world-series of romantic poem authors! You've captured what most every woman wants to hear when being asked for her hand.

Just lovely!

[Liza]

you know what words to select to add to the magical moment

[Michael of Gilead]

Marriage? Aigghhh!!!! *run away*

[OT]

really nice!! and different, very romantic! lovely poem!

[Twilight]

Curious! Not exactly subtle, but this does ring true from what I have read of Marie's writing (so far). She writes messages from the heart. She also seems to have a fondness for spontaneity? Thankyou, for sharing this with us!