Angel's Winter Play

A winter solstice poem.

 

 

 

 

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-Angel’s Winter Play-

Frosty white

Blue sky days

 

Winter magic might

Take flight faraway

 

Downy snowflakes ice

As angels blistery skate and play

 

White turtledoves coo

On and on as twilight falls

From lost to saved

 

Angel souls soar like kites

On this eternal winter’s day

Reviews

[Alicia™]

What beautiful imagery this creates!

[Mauricio Montoya]

nice work, well done.

[Tina Kline]

Wow, this sure created a beautiful picture in my mind as I read it. Wonderful!

[Goodbye]

So lovely - again you paint such a lovely picture, infusing it with such an ethereal feel. I love your poems!

[Michael of Gilead]

How about sending those angels on over here to do some shoveling?

[Linear]

You chose a good font for this chilly winters poem, it warmed me and made me smile, for the rebirth of light

[*skittlez*]

this was really nice work i really love this poem

[Undying Glory]

this was really nice work, very surreal and picturesque. i sure enjoyed this poem here, such beauties that winter brings us. nice job!

[Twilight]

Although simple and a pleasure to read, this poem does seem to lack focus? Also, why does the writer regard this "winter's day" as "eternal"? Was that how she felt whilst writing, or is there some other meaning? Curiously, the writer says that "winter magic" may be taking place elsewhere "Take flight faraway". But, why? Surely, that is contradictory to the overall positive tone of the poem? Keep writing!

[akapr17other]

Very pretty. I enjoyed reading this.