The Girl

A poem about one's drive to thrive.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The Girl

She’s come undone

Her edges are frayed

And she’s been played

 

But they haven’t won

Lots of gumption she’s displayed

From solid persistence she’s made

 

Full of giggles and fun

By her people are dismayed

With her, there’s history to be made.

 

She’s come undone

Only to be remade.

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Some people are just made to dance and spin with joy, no matter what happens in a day.

Reviews

[Dream Weaver]

Interest title and one hell of a write.
Nicely done.....

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yes indeed..lovely sentiment..and great ending..

[Rikkevi Rue]

nice. well a person creates their own feelings...so right on and more power to you...or er...her i guess! LOL

[The Raven King]

I like your word choices in this piece. undone and gumption and frayed. I like the playfulness. I think it sounds better without the last line. good job

[sarah]

This paints a great picture I know I say that a lot but so many different poems paint different wonderful picture great work!

[ebonpinion]

Yes, I do like the ending of this. It's hopeful. ^_^

[Dark Empress]

I love this. It has a certain beauty to it. Like I can actually see them dancing. Amazing poetry. Love the way this is written. :)

[Black Cat Fever]

Some people are just 'so alive' nothing can keep them down.

[Poetic Beauty]

I love the ending of this poem

[Tina Kline]

The extra strong ones or are they just lucky? Both perhaps? A great poem!