For Years For Me

Who is counting?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

For Years For Me

You loved

Toasts you made

Many of my family's caskets you carried

Rules you broke

Stories you told

Dishes you washed

Beds you made

Seats you saved

Jokes you told

Smiles you flashed

Hands you shook

Games you played

Hours you danced

Concerts you rocked

Tears you cried

Lips you kissed

Curves you touched

Coins you tossed

Wishes you made

Dogs you slept with

Many miles you drove

Many miles you flew

Burnt meals you ate

All to be with me

 

Thank you

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

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this had a great flow.. upbeat and inspiring..great job

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

This was very heartwarming. At the begining I couldn't see what it was leading to unitll the last two lines.

[Dark Empress]

Aw, you can feel the love in this poem. It's an amazing thing...love. Be lucky you have it. Some people never get to experience it. I count myself lucky everyday for the friends, family, and my husband and kids. Great write :) Thank you for sharing such a lovely poem.

[Arsenic Nemesis]

Aw, the gratitude in this is so sweet, love it. Nicely worded and I like how it's set out, kinda of like a list of things to do, which is very interesting and ties in with the context well, good job~

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Lovely gesture.

[Jibey]

Gratifying, indeed

[just take a breath]

hmmm... unique.

i havent really seen very many like this so good job :)

[Cynthia]

Fun and a happy poem, I enjoy reading it much.

[hannajade]

nice, happy poem. i enjoyed it:)

[TAO]

Now, that is precious. Sounds like everyone is in a mood to dedicate their pieces. Marie Harrison, nice work. Real nice work.