For Years For Me

Who is counting?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

For Years For Me

You loved

Toasts you made

Many of my family's caskets you carried

Rules you broke

Stories you told

Dishes you washed

Beds you made

Seats you saved

Jokes you told

Smiles you flashed

Hands you shook

Games you played

Hours you danced

Concerts you rocked

Tears you cried

Lips you kissed

Curves you touched

Coins you tossed

Wishes you made

Dogs you slept with

Many miles you drove

Many miles you flew

Burnt meals you ate

All to be with me

 

Thank you

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Mauricio Montoya]

like how this came together. great job.

[Adam :P]

unique good.

[JanieB]

This is really good. I love the unique style you have used.

[Liza]

acknowledgement of someone that served in a labor of love in practice; very practical and gracious

[Undying Glory]

this was really sweet work, really beautiful. this was particularly good for me as sometimes we take our loved ones for granted and forget everything they've done for us, while we seemingly exalt our own good deeds. brilliant

[Michael of Gilead]

Sounds very....yes you did this, but you did that too....an imperfect life

[Linear]

Dogs you slept with?
love will and should surmount any and all problems to reach its goal, this poem relates that so well

[sarah]

this is so romantic! this such a great poem!! great work

[Tina Kline]

This is very romantic and kinda tender. Showing appreciation for others is one of the most important things anyone can do.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

GREAT, GREAT! POEM!