Petal Power

A flower poem.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Petal Power

Your petals brighten my day

They have the power

To sweeten sour days

 

Rays of sun

Shine light on me

When you’re

Within my view

 

Your vibrant hues

Change my tune

Little Flower

 

Reviews

[Alicia Schroeder]

Pritty :)

[JanieB]

So lovely. Great photo too.

[Dark Empress]

This is cute. I love this. Great write :)

[Dinesh Sairam]

Don't think I'm showing off. But this exactly seemed to me like the positive version of one of my poems (http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/DineshThePoet/639660/).

The only thing off is the word 'tune'. It's a word of yesteryear and doesn't fit in with the rest, younger words.

Keep writing.

[Short.Nerd]

Love it!

[hannajade]

THis is fantastic!!!!!!!!! I LOVE it!!!!! :):)

[Goodbye]

Oh so very sweet, Marie! I just love this.

[Cynthia]

A Simple Great Poem!!
Nice Written, and there's no words to describe the beauty of this poem!

[Norma M Sutton]

What a "day brightener" :D

[sarah]

This so simple but so powerful! and wonderful! great job