Venice

A nonsense poem.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Venice

Under the Bridge Of Sighs

You told me lies

In St. Mark’s Square

I decided that I no longer cared

Now that we have no heart ties

Someone new lies between

My creamy thighs

 

Reviews

[just take a breath]

hmmm... not my favorite piece..

i just think that this could have been better without the whole "creamy thighs" thing. that kind of got the poem changing in a different direction than saying "i was in love. u hurt me. bye" instead is more or less saying "i was in love with you. you hurt me. now, im gunna have sex with someone else to make you jealous.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Kittens got claws and is not afraid to use them... there is always someone better around the corner.

[Solidad]

Oh my! Such a backbone this piece has. I think this IS my favorite. Granted I've written and read my fair share of poems about heartbreak but I LOVE poems about how hearts don't break even and how the author is allowed to walk away unscathed.