Goodbye

A poem of goodbyes.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Goodbye

Gaze at me with tender eyes

As you spread your acid lies

Watch me as I say goodbye

To the life I left behind

 

The one you’ll try to hide

For the rest of your

Days alive

 

Because I honestly tried

It’s easier for me to say goodbye

I have nothing left to hide

 

 

 

Reviews

[Tina Kline]

For some reason its always hard to say goodbye, even to the people we know we must get away from. If we've been emotionally attached to them, its so painful and hard to leave but once we do, we suddenly realize "What a relief! Glad I'm not with them anymore!" It was like that for me, anyway.

[Goodbye]

Another great poem of getting in touch with reality...

[Arsenic Nemesis]

"I have nothing left to hide" that line just hit me; wow. Wonderful, mortal, pure gold, loved it~

[Michael of Gilead]

Beautifully said Marie

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

When we've tried our best...its not as hard to say goodbye.
Your words are strong.

[Jibey]

'Acid eyes'... a powerful image...

[Robin]

well done ~ lies and liars are best walked away from ~

[Cynthia]

WOW! I love this poem!
I can relate to this poem much!

[sarah]

Man do I know how this feels! great write it really hit home

[Michael Todd]

This is also an excellent poem and hits home for me right now.