Goodbye

A poem of goodbyes.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Goodbye

Gaze at me with tender eyes

As you spread your acid lies

Watch me as I say goodbye

To the life I left behind

 

The one you’ll try to hide

For the rest of your

Days alive

 

Because I honestly tried

It’s easier for me to say goodbye

I have nothing left to hide

 

 

 

Reviews

[Alicia™]

The first two lines were my favorite… Though I generally don't like rhymes, I like it when one or two things rhyme and it seems effortless.

[JanieB]

Lovely.

[Sports Girl]

great job

[Mauricio Montoya]

good job well done.

[Jeff Bresee]

Well done.

[ebonpinion]

Sometimes you just have to say goodbye and move one.

[Dark Empress]

Saying goodbye is one of the hardest things we all face at one time in our life. Great write :) Thanks for sharing.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

It's hard To say goodbye and move on, even when it's best for you! Great write!

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linear says it all..but if your intentions are pure..you have nothing to fear

[Linear]

It's not the saying goodbye that's the hardest part, It's the not looking back.
heartfelt poem