Your Last Breath

A deadly poem.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Your Last Breath

On those dark lonely nights

When you close your eyes

To go to sleep

Make sure I’m not there

Lingering like must in the air

 

If I could slit your throat

And get away with it

I would in a heartbeat

And watch you bleed to death

With a grin

 

You think you’re the only one

Who can be cold and heartless

But you’re not

 

So watch your back when

You’re all alone

For I’ll be waiting

When the time is right

To give you

Your last fright

 

Oh and what a sight

To watch you take

Your Last breath

Before your death

Reviews

[Lovely Lady]

go!

[Tina Kline]

Whoa! Dark and vicious and so very frightening. Gave me shivers reading it. The hate and anger almost leap out of the words! This is fantastic!

[sarah]

oooo dark! great work!

[Linear]

Ok from now on you can sleep in the spare room, And I'm locking the bloody door


Good work though

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Now I'm looking behind my back! Great poem

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

So this is the other side.
I will be sure to never tread here.
scary..scary work. lol

[Fran Marie]

watching my back and sleeping with one eye open....mean marie...lol

[JanieB]

Oh my goodness Marie. Pity the person this is aimed at.

[Michael of Gilead]

Aiighh....no sleep tonight ;)

I think you ment mist in the first stanza? :)

[Art Sun]

oh oh...