Your Last Breath

A deadly poem.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Your Last Breath

On those dark lonely nights

When you close your eyes

To go to sleep

Make sure I’m not there

Lingering like must in the air

 

If I could slit your throat

And get away with it

I would in a heartbeat

And watch you bleed to death

With a grin

 

You think you’re the only one

Who can be cold and heartless

But you’re not

 

So watch your back when

You’re all alone

For I’ll be waiting

When the time is right

To give you

Your last fright

 

Oh and what a sight

To watch you take

Your Last breath

Before your death

Reviews

[Alicia Schroeder]

Chilling peice.. Very well put..

[Sports Girl]

Awesome job

[Short.Nerd]

Great job!

[Jeff Bresee]

Chilling. Nice work.

[Liza]

smooth, scary and suffocating!

[Jibey]

Seems like a longing for revenge... or a vampire's Christmas treat

[Goodbye]

Are we having an angry day too? *giggle* Well, there are days like that, aren't there - and you depicted those black holes very, very well!

Great job!

[Doug Ordunio]

Like the darkness of this! Very bleak!

[Cafe Reader]

Wow! Great writing!

[Cynthia]

Great Work!!
A Dark Poem, great one!