Crocodile Love

A ancient ritual of love.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Crocodile Love

Bubbles surface

She sees them blow

He rubs his nose

Across her green face

They sink below

Where they mesh with

An intimate reptilian embrace

Its crocodile love

Reviews

[Doug Ordunio]

Pretty funny...guess you never hear missy crocodile say "Can I get on top this time?" That ain't ever going to happen. Sort of looks like she's getting drowned in the process, too.

I imagine you didn't want to get into the "head-slapping" thing...Great job!

[Samuel Dickens]

Even scaly, cold-blooded reptiles can't resist the call of romance, huh?

[James Paulin]

Oh Lawdy mama those Friday nights
When Suzi wore her dresses tight... Elton John ( Crocodile Rock )

I really like this poem...Well done

[Jibey]

Underwater sex is rather good... even with a rather rough partner lol

A charmingly amusing piece

[TAO]

...what...? Wow... Okay, this is random; it speaks to my reptilian brain, though... And what more, we are smiling for it. Forgive my saying this, but this is a very cute poem.