For You I Was Made

A poem of devotion. A Team Renfield poem creating a character.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

For You I Was Made

My eyes are a midnight blue hue 

And my heart is lit aglow for you

But Lucia is my given name

 

I’m six foot two and live five rows

Behind you but anywhere around you

Is where I wish to reign

 

I am a quiet gentle man with strong hands

And I have a long ashen mane

 

Each night I dream of softly

Kissing your warm rosebud lips

And curvy hourglass hips

Until I do I’ll

Go wildly insane

 

When I sleep 

As I dream of you each night

I yearn to lick your sweetness

Like a striped candy cane

 

If only I could ride you as I please

Like a long slow midnight train

 

Please don’t pull away

From me because for you I’m  

 Just plain insane

 

Eventually my love for you will surely

Bring me great shame

 

My fire for you is so raging hot

To quench it

Please let the skies

Downpour with rain

 

We could spend eternity together

Still my passion for

You could never be contained

 

Because your laughter shoots

Me to a higher star

Filled celestial plain

 

Your bronze dusted

Amber eyes draw me

To your golden heart vein

 

Each day I know you’re on the earth

I strut proudly with my plumed head high

Like an elegant wood crane

 

From your heavenly honeysuckle scent

I shall never abstain

 

Please be gentle with me

I’m your vigilant servant

And when it comes

To worshiping you

I have no shame

 

My love for your natural beauty and feminine

Charms shall never wane

 

For you

Lovely Lady

My heart and soul

Was made.

 

 

Author's Note

Let me know what you think.

Reviews

[tynamite]

He looks like Preston from the Ordinary Boys.

[TAO]

I would clap, but I seem to be typing at the moment. You know, I must say, this is one of the best I've seen from you (in no way saying the others are bad; I don't believe they are). Nicely done, Marie Harrison.

[Jibey]

Well, this was full of offerings that any man in his senses would wish to take up... I was just wanting your licks

[Undying Glory]

really sweet work. don't we all hope for someone special like in this poem? great job here and i sure hope to read more of these!

[Norma M Sutton]

Very nice. Sounds a bit like a "what I'm looking for" list.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This sounds like a very special person.
You left no doubt about it.

[sarah]

awwwwwwwwwwwwwww that is sooooooooo sweet I am such a hopeless romantic I love these types of poems

[Closedown]

What a secret that is! Lovely. Renfieldians unite!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Marie, this was so beautifully written! I was caught up in the moment as I read each line! great poem!

[CrashDavis47]

Several good lines. I enjoyed it keep up the good work.