Dream Reflections

A poem about about falling asleep.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Dream Reflections

 

So drained,

I feel like a trained monkey

Who is paid to dance

 

I can't wait for

The chance to sleep

If it doesn't

Happen soon

Grim reaper might come

Knocking at my door

When I fall asleep

 Driving home

 

I shall visit the moors of

Ancient fairies and

Hills of enchantment,

Once my curly head lands

On my feather pillow

 

I might dream of lazy days

Laying under a weeping willow tree

After taking a long dip in a cool

Stream on a hot summer day

 

Who knows where my

Subconscious might take me,

Good thing my

Admission will be free,

Because I don't have a

Penny on me currently

 

Time is ticking so swiftly

 These trying days,

I must say goodbye,

Before I drift off to

Dreamland too suddenly

 

Goodnight

Reviews

[JanieB]

Good write.

[Short.Nerd]

A lovely poem. Great job

[YouoweYoupay]

Wow! Sleeping is an awesome, free of charge, surreal adventure. Great poem. Love the image! 100

[Michael of Gilead]

To sleep, perchance to dream

[M Garcia]

I'm reading this at work and it makes me long for my bed more than I already do. Nicely written Marie.

[Linear]

In dreams we can visit far away places, meet princes and princesses, and it dont cost a dime.

Loved your dreamscape

[hannajade]

I love this!!

[MuSe Ampoule]

Very good! Good flow and meter.

I suffer from insomnia a lot and can really relate to this! I love sleep and love my vivid dreams...when they come. Have nearly fallen asleep at the wheel a couple of times...but thankfully haven't.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Dream on, dream on, nice work.

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This was a fantastic scribe of well woven words! I loved the part about admission being free and not having the penny! Each stanza blossomed with rich and full images that embraced the reader smoothly.

Great Write!