"Zinger"

Head trauma.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

“Zinger”

Concussion stunned me;

Obfuscated for a year,

Eventually healed.

 

 

Reviews

[Jessica]

Hey
May I ask what are you writing about? I can't understand any of thse wierd words! Is this a wried poem?

[Sunny Skye]

Wow weird wound but nice poem

[MuSe Ampoule]

Nice Shinah' :) Good Senryu, and great use of the WOTD. :)

[Undying Glory]

now that's a nasty wound. i think you've sure written a great one right here. nice poem!

[Norma M Sutton]

OOOOWWWWIIIIEEEE!

[Wondering Mind]

Interesting use of the WOTD

[Linear]

Bewildered lost and confused, but never for ever

[ShaneBerry]

amazing word choice, very unique and the picture is a good attention getter

[Tina Kline]

Ouch!!! Man, I bet that one sure hurt! Glad you healed. You did a wonderful job on the poem!!!

[Mauricio Montoya]

From the school of hard knocks.