Rush Hour

A heavy traffic poem.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Rush Hour

Frenetic traffic;

Distracted drivers squeal tires,

Traffic kills people.

 

Reviews

[M Garcia]

Unfortunately that's true. Its why I don't drive, people are nuts!

[Michael of Gilead]

and i'd love to reach out and grab that b*****d next to me and......oh...oops ;)

[emmajoy]

Fine haiku, certainly different from the norm!

[Jibey]

I think that policewoman is a definite distraction!

[MuSe Ampoule]

Great job. I think they're wrecking from seeing the hot traffic cop. No literally, she's got to be burning up in that get up...They wreck out of concern...well maybe not. :)

[JanieB]

Excellent haiku. Well done.

[Tina Kline]

I agree, when someone gets behind a wheel they can be just as deadly as a gun, more so I think!

[sarah]

really great haiku

[Jessica]

Lovely haiku! This beautiful poem is really real. People nowedays are too rush. They should relax a bit.
It is smart that you use such simple but important topic, traffic is really bussy in Hong Kong. the poem is lovely, you can add more haikus to it.
Great job! You should keep it up.

[Short.Nerd]

Sadly that is true.
Great poem!