Wedding Ring

A personal poem inpired by Team Renfield.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Wedding Ring

Why did you take my wedding ring?  Did taking it give you a zing? Did hurting me give you a double ring in your b b thing? Did the carats make your heart sing?

 

Did you think your new lady would like my ring?  Wouldn’t it sting her to know whose thing that was first darling? 

 

That hurt more than anything.  Why did you take my ring?

Reviews

[Kat Plunkett]

Wow, if this really happened to you or someone you know, they are apparently better of without this d********g son of a ___!!

[M Garcia]

Excellent write Marie. If this happened to you, good riddance, though I know it hurt you. What a pr***k!

[Michael of Gilead]

if one would be so cruel, then your better off without

[Liza]

i can understand if the engagement was off to then give it back - but you are writing about your wedding ring....after getting married...
what an idiot...

[TAO]

My ex-fiance suggested I keep the ring I gave her and give it to someone else later on. Utter nonsense. You don't give another woman your ex's ring... Bad joo joo. Anyway, the poem was great, in spite of the...questions. Very well done, Marie Harrison.

[Jessica]

Hi Marie Harrison,
does this really happened to you? how poor! If I were his new girlfriend, i would throw the ring into the bin and slap him! No woman would like a ring worn by his old darling before.he shouldn't take that!!! That man is a total jerk!!!!!
If i were you, I would call him out and murder him( kidding) . Anyway, I know you are sad about this, also am I. but I can only wish you to forget about him and go find a new botfriend.


Come on! Be happier!!!


Best reguards

Jessi.

[Rick Puetter]

Hi Marie,

Yes, I can see that this hurts. And you're right. I don't think a new girlfriend would want this. Why did he take your ring? There's no good reason other than he didn't want you to have it and I know that hurts.

So sorry.

Another nice write.

Best regards,

Rick

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is a Grade-A Jerk.

The woman here has a fan.
The new woman must want to be her really bad.

It almost makes you wonder if the guy
is only a means to an end.

[sarah]

That is terrible! a*s hole!!

[Norma M Sutton]

Oh my . . . yes a ring with a story!