Peace

A sad poem.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Peace

Hate runs like a vein through me

Want to end this pain deep inside of me

Can never measure up

Never can please

Just need to end my life in peace

 

 

Reviews

[Short.Nerd]

Wow. This is great. Amazing job (:

[YouoweYoupay]

This poem was deeply touching. So much sadness that even words running down the pages wouldn't be enough to explain... an empty ghost in you gazing at the sky mist through your eyes. Good write.

[Michael X]

Wow, this is amazingly heartfelt and speaks in volumes. A tragedy
and longing to escape. pure poetry, awsome job on form and flow.

[Art Sun]

Funny how we perceive peace...at times death is probably the outlet to its grasp and yet we have been given life to experience every sadness, joy, emotion, fortunate and unfortunate circumstances...

such is life...

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is an honest and critical look at one's self.
Such honesty is the derivative of true change.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Such a deep sad emotion in this poem!! Peace is hard too find in this world we live in, but one has to keep fighting to find it and not let earthly things drag us down which we all offten let that happen!!!