Raw Curves

Raw Curves

A Poem by Marie Harrison
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A sketchy poem

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Raw Curves

Rice paper sketches;

Black ink smudges

Cover hands,

Round curves

Drawn with love.

 

 

© 2010 Marie Harrison


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a charming image, drawn from imagination, drawn with love... well written!

Posted 14 Years Ago


sketches are like short form poetry , more feeling and meaning than detail , nice piece

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like that it shifts the focus to the writers hands. It kind of makes you think that the artists hands were drawn round with curves by God.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Lovely...its small yet your bron words describe the black and white portrait so well.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very nice… It shows a snapshot of how an artist draws. Love it!

Posted 14 Years Ago


I am not sure what to say.. it's the 3rd time in the past few minutes that I am coming back to this write. More than the words , its the potrait that is catching my attention. I am not much into the art of painting emotins and yet this sketch has something about it. Specially the eyes. I am not sure what am I feeling looking at it. I will be back once I know what this strange yet known feeling is.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Almost like a poem with more than one layer - the phrase 'round curves' triggers erotic thoughts - as though the hands that draw are taking added pleasure in the curves they are sketching...

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on November 24, 2010
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Marie Harrison
Marie Harrison

Atlanta, GA



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