Raw Curves
A Poem by
Marie Harrison
A sketchy poem
Raw Curves
Rice paper sketches;
Black ink smudges
Cover hands,
Round curves
Drawn with love.
© 2010 Marie Harrison
Reviews
a charming image, drawn from imagination, drawn with love... well written!
Posted 14 Years Ago
sketches are like short form poetry , more feeling and meaning than detail , nice piece
Posted 14 Years Ago
sketches are like short form poetry , more feeling and meaning than detail , nice piece
I like that it shifts the focus to the writers hands. It kind of makes you think that the artists hands were drawn round with curves by God.
Posted 14 Years Ago
I like that it shifts the focus to the writers hands. It kind of makes you think that the artists hands were drawn round with curves by God.
Lovely...its small yet your bron words describe the black and white portrait so well.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Lovely...its small yet your bron words describe the black and white portrait so well.
Very nice… It shows a snapshot of how an artist draws. Love it!
Posted 14 Years Ago
Very nice… It shows a snapshot of how an artist draws. Love it!
I am not sure what to say.. it's the 3rd time in the past few minutes that I am coming back to this write. More than the words , its the potrait that is catching my attention. I am not much into the art of painting emotins and yet this sketch has something about it. Specially the eyes. I am not sure what am I feeling looking at it. I will be back once I know what this strange yet known feeling is.
Posted 14 Years Ago
I am not sure what to say.. it's the 3rd time in the past few minutes that I am coming back to this write. More than the words , its the potrait that is catching my attention. I am not much into the art of painting emotins and yet this sketch has something about it. Specially the eyes. I am not sure what am I feeling looking at it. I will be back once I know what this strange yet known feeling is.
Almost like a poem with more than one layer - the phrase 'round curves' triggers erotic thoughts - as though the hands that draw are taking added pleasure in the curves they are sketching...
Posted 14 Years Ago
Almost like a poem with more than one layer - the phrase 'round curves' triggers erotic thoughts - as though the hands that draw are taking added pleasure in the curves they are sketching...
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Added on November 24, 2010
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Marie Harrison Atlanta, GA
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Momma told me to get out and enjoy life, so now I'm going to dance.
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