His Angelic Bride

A white wedding poem

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

His Angelic Bride

Descending the stairs;

Her diaphanous gown flowed,

His eyes followed her.

 

Reviews

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Exceptional...I have a hard time writing haiku...

[M Garcia]

Great haiku and I agree with calling you Queen of Haiku. Keep it up!

[Cafe Reader]

Really nice!

[TAO]

As would mine...and any other man's... I like this word painting here, and the image you've chosen is pretty cool, too (anime nerd here).

[Goodbye]

Awwww, quite lovely, so perfect for a bride and groom. You have a knack for pure romance, Schweetie!

[Tina Kline]

Wow! This creates the perfect image of that oh so happy moment! Wonderful and beautiful!

[MuSe Ampoule]

As they should! Very good! Nice image painted with your words!

[Mauricio Montoya]

nice.

[Linear]

And she filled the air, gosh WOTD done so well

[JanieB]

Great haiku.