Beautiful Day

A glorious day poem.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Beautiful Day

Blue sky hangs above;

Canorous jays sing to me,

Today my heart swells.

Reviews

[Robin]

joyous ~

[Dream Weaver]

Nice Marie, As brother Dinesh suggests maybe
the name of a bird would fit better and give
it a extra zip... overall nicely done.

[Dinesh Sairam]

Well done, you've done the haiku fraternity proud with this one. I'd just like to suggest something: Instead of "Canorous birds", maybe you can put in the actual name of the bird. This way, the reader actually might hear the sound of the singing bird. But, it's just a suggestion. :) Well done once again and keep writing.

[sarah]

Wow this is really great!

[MuSe Ampoule]

Lovely and light! very good!

[nono]

Something short, yet beautiful keep up the good work!

[Light]

and what a beautiful day it is...literally, it's beautiful outside right now as i'm sitting inside on my computer...lol

[The Analog Kid]

I love listening to the birds, day or night. Very peaceful.

[Michael of Gilead]

Very nice and peaceful :)

[Goodbye]

Oh so very, very lovely, Ms. Marie. Makes me feel peaceful...