The Poison of the Widow Spider

A spider poem

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The Poison of the Widow Spider

The yearning need to be wrapped in her web

His desire for her is overwhelming, it never ebbs

He takes her, so she’ll have future eggs

Then she kisses him right before she eats his head

Author's Note

This is a Team Renfield Poem.

Reviews

[Wolf's Dark Song]

I like this. Great spider poem!

[ShaneBerry]

oooh, its a poem about creepy Arachnids in a non creepy way! nice job Marie

[YouoweYoupay]

My eyebrows slightly jumped at the end, then I remembered some insects do that. lol. Nice poem.

[alesuriko]

I adore this. The rhyme and rhythm are perfect and the satire is glorious. So funny! I hate spiders but I enjoyed this deeply. Thanks for entering it in my contest, although this is not tragicomedy. Tragicomedy are funny throughout the plot but end tragically, not humorously. The humor is found in the beginning and center of the text but it always end on a tragic note. You simply had it reversed. But wonderful poem on its own, I really enjoyed it!

[Mauricio Montoya]

Ouch!

[M Garcia]

nicely done.

[MuSe Ampoule]

It's a cruel buggy world out there! Great job!

[Black Cat Fever]

Great job, gave me the shivers and creepies when I read it. Wicked wicked!

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

oh deliciously horrific!!!!~ I must be wickedly disturbed since that last line put a great big smile on my face~ ;)~

[Eric Cox]

Cool horror write. Like it a lot. Great chill to the ending line. Nicely done.