Red Dawn

A poem of death.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Red Dawn

Color of life, red;

Chthonian king wears deep red,

By your bed he waits.

 

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Life red .. bright, daring, energetic, dangerous .. great

[Liz Alexander]

Amazing... I like it short and sweet

[Short.Nerd]

Great write!

[Pax Analog]

Cool, and o so Aries!

The senryu suits your insta-splash sensibility. The form favors vital energy and/or koan subtlety.

This immediacy of this piece is sexual but integral -- again your Aries NOW sense summons vividness, a sense of urgency, and clarity all at once. A powerful asset.

You use both the implicit and explicit quality of RED consistently well throughout your work.

The impassioned multitiered alertness of this piece is Zen.

[Mauricio Montoya]

nice work.

[Dream Weaver]

Nice Marie, well done..

[KL]

I love the last line. This is a great hyperbole of the sun.

[M Garcia]

This is great. I love the picture. The words accompanying it are just wonderful. Thanks for sharing.

[Tina Kline]

This is rather eerie, the red could be screaming danger!

[sarah]

I love your hikue's they are always so good!