Squeaky Clean Floors Of Teak

A hardwood poem.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Squeaky Clean Floors of Teak

All clean and shiny is my teak

When they step on my

Glossy black my heart leaps

Joyous smiles deep down my timbers leak

You can see your face and your physique

When you look at me

Don’t walk on me with your dirty feet

Shhh….. Whisper when you speak

If you’re real quiet you’ll hear me squeak.

 

Reviews

[Goodbye]

This is so cute, and you've managed to make a floor sound unbelievably interesting!

[Wondering Mind]

My goodness, even the floor squeaks!

[MuSe Ampoule]

This is a very clean poem, just like your squeaky teak! Pleasant to read.

freaky teaky

[sarah]

that really cool!!

[~Princess~]

awwwwws I love this poem as well. You did it again; perfect job.

[nono]

Nice job Marie, I was wondering if you were doing the prompts. I always love seeing what you come up with. I like it! lol was it weird enough? I like this though a nice, simple, clean write. lol :D

[JanieB]

This is excellent. I absolutely love it.

[luciddreamer]

Oh wow...how cool is this...awesome :)
Peace
Robin

[TAO]

Ah, i don't know why I was waiting... Well, your floor is pretty pleasant. :) Very well done. I can't seem to describe your work... It really is very good, though.