Squeaky Clean Floors Of Teak

Squeaky Clean Floors Of Teak

A Poem by Marie Harrison
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A hardwood poem.

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Squeaky Clean Floors of Teak

All clean and shiny is my teak

When they step on my

Glossy black my heart leaps

Joyous smiles deep down my timbers leak

You can see your face and your physique

When you look at me

Don’t walk on me with your dirty feet

Shhh….. Whisper when you speak

If you’re real quiet you’ll hear me squeak.

 

© 2010 Marie Harrison


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Very clever. Nicely done

Posted 14 Years Ago


OK, with a whisper, Excellent!

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is very nice, very clever. Great job on this!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Cute, from the floor's point of view, different.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Clever post .. smile-making .. just the words to read on a dull, wet day. Will whisper, promise, I'd love to hear the teak's squeaky clean music.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Hehe, that's rather cute. I like it. Definitely different. Thanks for sharing :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


You put on a workshop on personification.
Mad Skills.

Posted 14 Years Ago


the sensation of walking across a squeaky clean floor of teak was wonderfully captured. a lovely write about something so simple!

Posted 14 Years Ago


There is skill in this poem. It's actually really effective.

Posted 14 Years Ago


hehehehehe....now I'll be listening to the parquet floor

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on November 11, 2010
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Marie Harrison
Marie Harrison

Atlanta, GA



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