My Handsome King

My love for my handsome beach king.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

My Handsome King

Your royal palms gently wave

 at me each time I see you,

I have to blush

each time they do.

 

Your sugar white beaches moan

 for my feet to greet

them each time we meet.

My feet move to the beat

of salsa when they

 remember you.

 

Your gentle breezes caress my

hour glass hips each

 time I run to you.

They rock me like a baby

 when I sail over

your bright

blue waters.

 

Your bright moonbeams create

a halo around my head

as I shake my long golden

 hair to say hello to you.

They dance around like a drunken

 gypsy with the sparkly stars

 up above as I take my

 midnight stroll with you.

 

Your regal art deco

 buildings of pastel

stand at attention,

every time I dream

of your streets of gold.

 

Your sun's rays of warm

 glory tickle my

bare breasts gently 

as I rest my body on the

 safety of your

heavenly sands.

 

I humbly bow my

head to you with honor,

for your sweet

whispers of hospitality

have overtaken me, 

my Majestic King

 of the South Beaches.

Miami, you are my

handsome, winter friend.

 

 

Reviews

[Lauren Beth]

This is great...love your use of language. While reading I was trying to figure out who or what you were talking about....Miami, I have never been but heard it is amazing!! Great vivid imagery here too. Love it...it was sensual, fun, suspenseful....and more.

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Way cool ending! xD It certainly had me guessing till the end. The picture you use is a wonderful distraction. =)
Never been to Miami... I've heard it's really..REALLY hot during the summers. Like melt your brains hot. I think South L.A., is as hot as I would want!

Fun write xD

Kisses - Ash

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is just charming.
It's absolutely beautiful.
True love.

I loved it.

[Goodbye]

Whoa, baby! This is so sensuous, seductive, loving - I thought it meant for a lover until I saw your last two lines!

This is your very best, most creative poem yet!!!!!

[The Analog Kid]

Such a different feel. Great imagery on this one:)

[Chelsea]

Love it, great write! No suggestions, perfection :)

[India Brooks]

I love the layout of this and just the poem in general :) Great poem!

[Robin]

I have never been there until now