My Handsome King

My love for my handsome beach king.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

My Handsome King

Your royal palms gently wave

 at me each time I see you,

I have to blush

each time they do.

 

Your sugar white beaches moan

 for my feet to greet

them each time we meet.

My feet move to the beat

of salsa when they

 remember you.

 

Your gentle breezes caress my

hour glass hips each

 time I run to you.

They rock me like a baby

 when I sail over

your bright

blue waters.

 

Your bright moonbeams create

a halo around my head

as I shake my long golden

 hair to say hello to you.

They dance around like a drunken

 gypsy with the sparkly stars

 up above as I take my

 midnight stroll with you.

 

Your regal art deco

 buildings of pastel

stand at attention,

every time I dream

of your streets of gold.

 

Your sun's rays of warm

 glory tickle my

bare breasts gently 

as I rest my body on the

 safety of your

heavenly sands.

 

I humbly bow my

head to you with honor,

for your sweet

whispers of hospitality

have overtaken me, 

my Majestic King

 of the South Beaches.

Miami, you are my

handsome, winter friend.

 

 

Reviews

[Jvl narasimharao]

Your imagery is wonderful.The breeze may be your friend

[sarah]

This is an amazing write! full of wonder great write!

[Becky C Strukamp]

First, the fonts and structure are wonderful. I loved reading it. The poem outstanding. You penned this beautifully.

[Jibey]

Lovely thoughts... full of longing and delight

[emmajoy]

Beautifully presented, beautifully written .. you've married your beach to your emotions and made me feel the whole scene. Am almost purring.

I wanted to quote one stanza but can't find one I like more than another .. an great write, Marie, truly.

[YouoweYoupay]

Ooh it was about Miami! I was beginning to wonder who would possibly look THAT handsome. lol Loved the details, your fonts, and TOTALLY loved the color blue all over the page. Thank you so much. Keep writing!

[Short.Nerd]

Nicely done!

[Black Cat Fever]

Very beautiful.

[Alicia Schroeder]

This was amazingly beautiful, I love this peice very much.. Awesome!!

[justice]

You know, this piece's form alone makes it a great poem. The execution, blows my mind. Wonderful.