Earthquake

A earth shifting senyru.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Earthquake

God showed his anger;

The earth’s crust palpitated,

Haiti’s land buckled.

 

Reviews

[tynamite]

This poem is so great. I like the impact it has. It's always silly when I see some natural disaster on the news, and there's some news report or video of some foreigner in some other country saying that it's because it's a punishment from God. I like how your poem raises that issue of people who think that.

[emmajoy]

Whilst I don't believe God thinks in anger, this is a powerful write, stressed by the large font; the meaning's clear for readers to remember the terrible event.

[sarah]

God never gives up!

[nono]

Nice job, beautiful. God can give up too I suppose. Nice job this is wonderful! And that was a horrible day. Now all it is, is crap on the news nothing about what happened that day. Nice job!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Wow...This is like the haunting poetry
that archeologists find on cave walls.

[Norma M Sutton]

Woe. Didn't see that one coming.

Oh, that delved beyond the crust indeed. Very provoking.

[Goodbye]

Although I don't agree with the premise of Divine Retribution, it is a very strong poem, my friend!

[Wondering Mind]

That was only a groan, but it did indeed buckle. I don't want to be there when He's really angry.
A vibrant take on the WOTD