Sculpture

A poem about women.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Sculpture

Rounded, molded

Sculpted by God’s hands

Not made for the benefit

Of the hands of every man

 

You can look

But touches

Are not allowed

 

For I’m a treasure gem

Not a bruised piece of fruit

 

 

 

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

LOL WEll All woman worry that men see them as fruit

[Puzzle-bot]

I loved that because of the way you intertwined SO MANY different themes and they're all so true! You really do have the ability to read mingds. *claps*.

[No use.]

amen to that. ya hear that boys!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

There are a lot of great themes in this poem.
Its a shame that this kind of respect ever has
to be demanded.

[Lauren Beth]

Your words here are so empowering...and beautiful written. I love the message behind it...& love the idea of a women being a sculpture made by 'God's hands, not made for the benefit, of the hands of every man'....brilliantly penned!

[Snooki]

The picture makes the poem :D

[Dream Weaver]

Love the pic and the poem says it all..
Nicely done Marie...

[JanieB]

I really love this. Fantastic!

[Wolfwind Words]

This was fun! I liked the picture that you used for the poem. It certainly adds to the power of the ink and reinforces, not only the hands off concept, but the feeling women feel when men are to oppressing.

Great Ink!
Wolfie

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Well, there's something to be said for a tasty piece of fruit as well...lol...I like this. And that sculpture is whack....meaning cool and way out there. lol