It's Your Love

A poem about love.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It’s Your Love

Your love is

Like an elephant’s

Trunk that

Wraps around me

And carries me

To higher places

 

Your love is

Like a machine

Gun that

Sprays me

In every direction.

 

Your love is

Like a bottomless

Cup of coffee

It keeps

Pouring and pouring.

 

It’s your love

That gives me synergy.

 

 

 

Reviews

[KL]

You have penned some very original love analogies, and I like it. The closing stanza says it all, really... 'your love turns me into everything and anything.'

[The Analog Kid]

Pretty interesting way to describe love. Very true nontheless!

[Tate Morgan]

So interesting the things that make you think of love so different from my own but no less valid

[Norma M Sutton]

Nice

[MoonlightIce]

Aw! Very cute and sweet!

[Eric Cox]

Very cool. Cool descriptions. I like this a lot. A cool write.

[Lauren Beth]

A lovely little poem about love...really great. I love all the things you compare love to...so clever and cute. Especially the coffee reference because I'm a coffee addict :) Nice write!!

[TAO]

Amazing how love can do that, huh? This poem exudes truth like flowers blooming to spread their seed amongst their fold.

[Moonflower]

A very well thought out and beautiful piece. I enjoyed it.

[~Princess~]

Awwws I love the similarities in the write from elephant trunk to machine gun and more. Here's more perfection you're showing. tremendous write once again my friend.