It's Your Love

It's Your Love

A Poem by Marie Harrison
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A poem about love.

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It’s Your Love

Your love is

Like an elephant’s

Trunk that

Wraps around me

And carries me

To higher places

 

Your love is

Like a machine

Gun that

Sprays me

In every direction.

 

Your love is

Like a bottomless

Cup of coffee

It keeps

Pouring and pouring.

 

It’s your love

That gives me synergy.

 

 

 

© 2010 Marie Harrison


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I thought this was cute, but interesting as well. It is a unique poem. I love that it is though. It was a very creative idea. Good job on this piece. Thank you for sharing. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Elephants and machine guns...don't often get them together ;)

Posted 14 Years Ago


A rather odd and unique sort of love poem. I like it, not main stream at all.

Posted 14 Years Ago


so sweet, so sweet.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Another different, unique write!

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is really great! I like especially how your last word almost describes the method you've created in writing this poem: synergy. You took too things in all your stanzas and put them together to mean something so much more! When you say machine gun I think of something bad, but you put it together with love, and alter the meaning to something better. Good job!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Nice write. It is so true. Love is all of those things and so much more.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very Romantic Peice of Poem!
It's sooo sweet!

'Your love is
Like a bottomless
Cup of coffee
It keeps
Pouring and pouring.'

I love these lines really much!

Just a thing, I think the yellow of your font is little hard to see, it's too light...

Nice Poem!



Posted 14 Years Ago


Very romantic and very different. Unique and clever in imagery. Another awesome write!

Posted 14 Years Ago


This poem is beautifully written and I love Elephants!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on October 24, 2010
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Marie Harrison
Marie Harrison

Atlanta, GA



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