It's Your Love
A Poem by
Marie Harrison
A poem about love.
It’s Your Love
Your love is
Like an elephant’s
Trunk that
Wraps around me
And carries me
To higher places
Your love is
Like a machine
Gun that
Sprays me
In every direction .
Your love is
Like a bottomless
Cup of coffee
It keeps
Pouring and pouring.
It’s your love
That gives me synergy.
© 2010 Marie Harrison
Reviews
I thought this was cute, but interesting as well. It is a unique poem. I love that it is though. It was a very creative idea. Good job on this piece. Thank you for sharing. :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
Elephants and machine guns...don't often get them together ;)
Posted 14 Years Ago
Elephants and machine guns...don't often get them together ;)
A rather odd and unique sort of love poem. I like it, not main stream at all.
Posted 14 Years Ago
A rather odd and unique sort of love poem. I like it, not main stream at all.
so sweet, so sweet.
Posted 14 Years Ago
so sweet, so sweet.
Another different, unique write!
Posted 14 Years Ago
Another different, unique write!
This is really great! I like especially how your last word almost describes the method you've created in writing this poem: synergy. You took too things in all your stanzas and put them together to mean something so much more! When you say machine gun I think of something bad, but you put it together with love, and alter the meaning to something better. Good job!!
Posted 14 Years Ago
This is really great! I like especially how your last word almost describes the method you've created in writing this poem: synergy. You took too things in all your stanzas and put them together to mean something so much more! When you say machine gun I think of something bad, but you put it together with love, and alter the meaning to something better. Good job!!
Nice write. It is so true. Love is all of those things and so much more.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Nice write. It is so true. Love is all of those things and so much more.
Very Romantic Peice of Poem!
It's sooo sweet!
'Your love is
Like a bottomless
Cup of coffee
It keeps
Pouring and pouring.'
I love these lines really much!
Just a thing, I think the yellow of your font is little hard to see, it's too light...
Nice Poem!
Posted 14 Years Ago
Very Romantic Peice of Poem!
It's sooo sweet!
'Your love is
Like a bottomless
Cup of coffee
It keeps
Pouring and pouring.'
I love these lines really much!
Just a thing, I think the yellow of your font is little hard to see, it's too light...
Nice Poem!
Very romantic and very different. Unique and clever in imagery. Another awesome write!
Posted 14 Years Ago
Very romantic and very different. Unique and clever in imagery. Another awesome write!
This poem is beautifully written and I love Elephants!!!
Posted 14 Years Ago
This poem is beautifully written and I love Elephants!!!
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Added on October 24, 2010
Last Updated on October 24, 2010
Author
Marie Harrison Atlanta, GA
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Momma told me to get out and enjoy life, so now I'm going to dance.
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