Nowhere To Run To

A poem about possibilities.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Nowhere to Run to

Footsteps closing in;

Qualms about my bright future,

Up against a wall.

 

Reviews

[Buddhistboy73]

Not sure I understand this one...it seems like the writer feels trapped, but there is the inconsistency of the "Qualms about the bright future" line which stuck out for me here. although, there is the potential to use this as a springboard to move forward I guess....

[Cynthia]

Great Poem!
Well, with what other say about the sneakers, I really don't understand...
However, I think, the poem is just great!

[TAO]

The future's easy enough to fear. What a stark portrait of reality you've painted here.

[Lauren Beth]

Nice one, I like how you put qualms of a 'bright' future...you normally wouldn't think of putting those two together...

yeh, those heels aren't very practical lol.

[Dark Empress]

Next time use sneakers lol...I like it :)

[Wondering Mind]

It's them high heels..."Sneakers" is the answer.
But seriously, this is great.