Nowhere To Run To

A poem about possibilities.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Nowhere to Run to

Footsteps closing in;

Qualms about my bright future,

Up against a wall.

 

Reviews

[Buddhistboy73]

Not sure I understand this one...it seems like the writer feels trapped, but there is the inconsistency of the "Qualms about the bright future" line which stuck out for me here. although, there is the potential to use this as a springboard to move forward I guess....

[YouoweYoupay]

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[No use.]

chilling~ reminds me of a jail cell ... made me a bit claustrophobic :X , but i think that's the point :)

[Black Cat Fever]

Sometimes time isn't a friend, that's true. But it's not always the enemy either. Just depends on how we look at the situation.

[Michael of Gilead]

Course you can't run in those stilettos!

[Puzzle-bot]

I know how you feel, living in a place where you can never be alone, never really comforted, never really private or happy. You nailed this feeling, Marie!

[Short.Nerd]

Great job(: I agree with Tina Kline I hope it doesn't end in her death.

[Tina Kline]

Chilling! Hope this doesn't end in her death!

[Mauricio Montoya]

Some once said always move forward and don’t look back because whatever you’re running from might catch up. Great job well done.

[jinjahman]

indecision at critical juncture, well jotted!

[M Garcia]

Nicely written. The middle makes me feel uncertainty and pushes the point home thatt no matter what there is nowhere to run.