Razor Witch

A bloody witch poem.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Razor Witch

Come here my sweet!

Come to my house

To trick or treat,

Nothing will beat

What I have to eat.

 

My face is rather green

But I’m nice to meet.

My nose is very crooked,

But my black teeth

Will widely greet.

 

If you are nice boys and girls

I’ll give you poison or

Candy full of

Razors to eat!

 

So scoot your

Feet over here

And come trick or treat

On my side of the street.

I’ll make your gums bleed

For Halloween, my Sweet!

 

 

 

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I love this. It was funny and cute. I love how you portrayed the witch too. Thanks for sharing. :D

[No use.]

i'm sold...
sadly, doesn't take a lot when candy is involved. hahaha

[The Analog Kid]

Spooky and cute:)

[Michael of Gilead]

You have some strange neighbors Marie ;)

[Mauricio Montoya]

great job well done.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Thats was so fun to read... a very comical take on those nasty witches.

[YouoweYoupay]

The description of the classic halloween old witch. Nice rhymings! I felt a slight itch on the inside of my mouth as I reached the last line...lol.

My face is rather green
But I’m nice to meet.

[Black Cat Fever]

Scary for sure, think I'll stay on the other side of the street, don't trust anyone with a mean scratchy voice like that witch!

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a scary fun read!

[Sean M. Addams]

a very fun read ..liked the detail in this too.. perfect for the halloween season..great job on this witchy write