GHOSTS

An acrostic ghostly poem.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ghosts     

Ghoulish spirits that float around

Haunting the living with moaning sounds

Orbs of evil swirling and moving on sacred grounds

Secret beings that hover above graveyard mounds

Terrorizing living people who are sleeping soundly

Suspicious activities that happen when no one else is around.

 

Reviews

[Eric Cox]

Very cool piece. Love the spooky feel to it. Awesome pen upon this, a cool write.

[Michael of Gilead]

I'm a scart!

[Puzzle-bot]

I love this poem. 'orbs of evil swirling and moving on sacred grounds' just captures the brooding essence of these mysterious things.

[♥(heatherawesome..]

wow this is really interesting

[Mauricio Montoya]

Excellent rhythm and rhyme.

[Short.Nerd]

Awesome!(:

[KL]

It was cute, but the rhymes get pretty repetitive (look for yourself, you run out of things to say and use 'around' and 'sound' twice haha). Not your most spectacular poem but it was fun.

[Tina Kline]

This sounds just like ghosts! Like how you spelled out ghost with this outstanding poem!

[Buddhistboy73]

Love it....."Orbs of evil swirling....." great line. Although I think if the ghosts could speak they may say "we are not all so bad"...lol.....I think it's a fascinating topic though, as we cannot possibly know all the phenomena that exist in this crazy world of ours.....

[M Garcia]

Well you certainly love Halloween! lol. If you haven't entered you should enter this in my Halloween contest. Thank you for sharing this.