Vampires

A vampire cinquain.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Vampires

Thirsty Hybrids

Flying, Killing, Sucking

Eternal Night Blood Beasts

Monsters

 

 

 

Reviews

[boyinblue]

I don't really get it. You just described a vampire....
I guess it was good for what it stood for, at least it wasn't *God forbid* generic.
Not really my cup of tea, but I guess that's the thing with poetry, it varies from person to person.

[Brandon]

I don't often see this kind of poem anymore, and not to offend or anything but i don't particularly care for vampires either but this was good, keep up the good work.

100/100

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

ohhh.... now this vampire poem describe vampires as scary monsters not sexy creatures:)...

[Dream Weaver]

I do love horror and you've captured it here!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

I'm OUT of HERE!!! lol
Nice!

[AreWeBothCrazy]

This poem reminds me of my friend, and a certain series of books I love so much :) Well done, interesting read, nice and simple :)

[TAO]

B******s... Can't wait long enough at the blood bank... Guess I can't really blame them, though. This senryu is how vampires should remain; down with TWILIGHT (and no offense if you're into that sort of thing...).

[Tina Kline]

This is really cool! Love it! You got the vampire down perfectly in these four lines. This is fantastic!

[Norma M Sutton]

Nicely done.

[MoonlightIce]

Awesome! I love vampires!