Heeh, I LOVE the picture you placed above it. Very graffiti-like. That's the thing about graffiti. One never knows exactly who paints it on the walls. Sometimes the artwork turns out to be pretty amazing.
Idk if I'd call graffiti "valuable" since it has not much worth being sprayed upon trains and city walls :/
however, it does take great talent, so perhaps "creative ability" or "a skillful talent" although both of 'em are kinda pushing it.. sorry, I'm not good at haikus, they aren't my thing, so nevermind my criticism if you find it of no help. but still say "valuable" a perfect word, but it does most certainly fit...
Good job however anyways ^_^
Oh you know what!?!?! I love graffiti art! It's just amazing! I like this well expressed beautiful!
Posted 14 Years Ago
Technically, Coral and Fabian are both right on the syllables. 'Valuable' is one of those fun words that has either 3 or 4 syllables depending on they way you want to use it. So no, she doesn't 'need' another syllable. However, if she 'wanted' to throw in an extra one, she could. And either way would come to 5. ;)
With that aside, it's a great tribute just the way it is. ;)
The last line does not need aother syllable....valuable is 4 and art is one...by my math that is 5...Anyhoo....I like this...even though I'm not familiar with the subject matter.
Nice senyru, but the last line needs another syllable. I would also try to offer something other than a definition, another sort of insight or something. I dunno.
Either way, nice write.