Thump, Thump, Thump

A nonsense poem.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thump, Thump, Thump

I fell in love with a tree stump.

One look at her and I had a hard lump.

She batted her eyes at me and my heart went kerplunk.

For her love and admiration, I’d smell like a million skunks.

In a tub of ice water, for her I’d take a dunk.

To me that girl is more than just a stump.

She makes my heart go thump thump thump!

 

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I liked this. It really was different and interesting. Thanks for sharing. :D

[Michael of Gilead]

Humping a stump?....we may have to talk about your caffeine intake Marie ;)

[Mauricio Montoya]

nice..........

[M Garcia]

Different. Intriguing. Thanks for sharing.

[Black Cat Fever]

Love this, a very unique and different sort of love poem. It made me think of trees in love with each other for some reason.

[The Analog Kid]

Unique. I like that the stump was a she.

[YouoweYoupay]

I agree with coral. The rhyme scheme is good. An unusualy yet interesting poem. Keep writing.

[Miss Coral]

Wonderful :)
Love the rhyme scheme. c:

-Coral-

[Short.Nerd]

I love how this rhymes. Great job(:

[nono]

WOW everything got pushed over! How is this a nonsense poem? I like it a lot I love all your poems they're all so beautiful and wonderfully expressed! You did a fantastic job as always!